you sound pretty fucked up to me :D i like where your style is going, but working with hc kicks + breaks can be a bitch. i recognize a smal ordeal i have to cope with myself every time here: structure and buildup and ideas are real good, but the mix of it all sounds a bit to bassy. too much bass takes out the energy of a song, it makes the whole song sound like it has been recorded trough a bucket of butter. but yeah, mastering is a bitch. but it makes or breaks a song, so do try and experiment with that. about the song, as i said, like yur breaks, kicks nicely integrated, guud speed, enough variations to keep my attention, nasty distortion, i like it all. raggavocals fit wel too jup, you got a kickass track here, just a pitty your bass kinda eats the song. but as i said, i'm having the same troubles... allready looking forward to the next one, cheers