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sounds pretty good but I don't like the triphop and jungle combined. That just doesn't fit for me. I would also like to suggest that you build in some imperfections in the part where the organ is playing solo (with the beat). It sounds a little too 'computer-built' at the moment.
I would start with the beat immediatly, your synths need more depth and sound quality (maybe add some effects? and some more variation) i like the rythm section around 2:30 but the synth play which enters then is two eclectic to my taste (and rythm wise it fights with the rest)