listen,its not that i do not like it,its like a picaso in glass frame,the wrong picture;just to prove how i see this; what do ya hear in this deephouse; at most i can figger something out like silicone soul,but that is already more chearfull; i respect your music and opinion,but all your melo's ,schould have been used for a other genre>tech house-trance; cause like this,its gone make me cry and if it was the entention to make sad music,make trip hop or whatever, but not sad deephouse,sexy and mean,is what we want; i think this lacks the most in your song,whatever structure you will use,or sound; cant forget the melo and harmony,anaywys,dont feel mad,or mis-understood; it was 50 %convincing,exept the housejacket; greetz