Road Runners

Distreality

Electrobel Veteran

2006-09-20 22:00:00

nice, but the high sound in the first part could use some more fx imho.... the piano in the second part as well... for the rest it's nice...relaxed vibe...

lebienheureux

Electrobel Veteran

2006-09-20 22:00:00

i think your melodies sounds a bit cheap but your beats sounds good... you should work more on it. you can do better i think

KWeN

Electrobel Veteran

2006-09-24 22:00:00

Well well ! First thing I hear is quite good, it has a good groove for the moment... Maybe the bass is a little bit too loud. As Lebienheureux said, the melody is a bit cheap, you should work a bit more with reverb/delay and try to improve the melody with "contre-temps" You should add more little sounds (fx) which come rarely in the song but gives the atmosphere ;)

TalkyMist

Electrobel Veteran

2006-09-24 22:00:00

Many thanks for ur comments and explains, I'll work it more later, other songs are in progress :-)