melo's r not bad,but some rhythme paterns are overdone,its like some percs ,cancel each other out,(when it gets bizy ,ofcourse) or ya did some crazy shit with some rexes, or ya jammed it all at one timesignature,through some drumdevice,its like some kicks are some miliseconds behind the kick very anoiing,when ya start to notice it,did actually listen 2,before pointing it out cant blame me for beiing acurate,and when ya are focusing on other parts of the song,ya dont notice the stupid litlle details anymore, again,nice composition,to listen too,could use some cleaner mix-ing,but acording to the dynamic i forgive you,muhahahah,greeeeetz