North OCEAN

You know what dude, it's not like I have forgotten about this track. Do you have a problem with criticism? Okay, so I give you a bad review, and you decide to delete your track. Instead of doing that, you could've just reworked and reposted it. To tell you the truth, it's not very nice of you to delete the criticism, if it's negative. You post your songs here, people do all the effort to give you some feedback (even if it's negative, remember it's only meant as a way to help each other), and you delete it because you can't handle someone's opinion???? dude, that really ain't nice! Now for the track: I have the impression you have reworked it a bit. But it's still not to my liking, claps and pizzicatos in the beginning still annoy me, but it's a matter of personal taste of course. I hope you will realize that for once... Now I hope you don't go deleting this again, just because I tell you I didn't like it. If you upload it, you take a risk, and you shouldn't expect everyone to like it. But neither should you delete reviews if they are rather negative.

Rabauw, i don't understand you....you don't like trance songs it's your taste but why told it each time......don't listen that kind of music. You are reason on one thing....i had reworked it a bit.....that's why i delete it. Hardcore section is not my taste but i don't lose my time to give a negative critic about each track..... You can be sure I accept the critic. I don't like "cosmic cloudscapes"....personal taste of course.

Well, yes, you are right. In general, I'm not really a trance fan. But, I still recognize a good trance tune when I hear one. What actually bothered me, was that after that bad review, you delete and repost it. I have no problem with that, but you can also just rework the track, change the mp3 and keep the comments. I think that's more fair. And, even though trance is not my favourite genre, I still enjoy it from time to time. Plus, just because it's not my usual genre, that doesn't mean it's "forbidden" for me to comment upon trance songs. I don't talk bad about every trance song I listen to, you know, there are some really great trance songs on Ebel. What I initially said about the standard claps, well I always say that. And it doesn't matter if it's trance, electro, or whatever. If someone uses those standard claps, it really gets to my system :) Like you said yourself, after all it's a matter of personal taste. I'll check some of your other works now, I'm sure you have songs that I'll like more than this one.

I agree with you wizardo!! me too i cry when I see la mer du nord :)

haaa la mer du nord ;)

Good ideas in there... But i'd have added a lot of reverb and stereo panning on the vocal sample, which will make it so much wider. Not fan about the pizzicato break which sounds too old. But well, it sounds good. About mixing and mastering : vocals have too much low-end and should sound brighter with a little bit of EQ & hipass filtering around 200hz, the kickdrum is bad and should be replaced, i would also lower fx level, and put reverb on the pads, and maybe change that bassline to a more wobby yet clearer one. Anyway, good work ! Greetings Jordan

Thank's for your helping comment ;) ;)