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xitrum

hellow! it's my first song, i'm a pure stagiaire, so....shit contest or not?? hope that it will give u in a good mood ;) enjoy! (but it's not my favorite one)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

theMinibot
theMinibot
Electrobel Veteran

et je voudrais te dire mon petit canari jaune(xitrum ca veut dire citron je crois dans ta langue ;) ) que je suis desolé si je t'ai vexé,tu sais pourtant ce que j'en pense reellement de ton tout premier morceau ;) enfin voila je te fais mes plus plate excuse tres sincerement et je te fais une gross bizz sur ta fess gauche ;) en tradui...and I would like to tell you my small canary jaune(xitrum Ca wants to say lemon-yellow I believe in your language;) ) that I am desolé if I upset you, you however know what I reellement think of your very first piece;) finally veiled I make you my more punt excuses very sincerely and I make you a big kiss on your butt left

Erophin
Erophin
Electrobel Veteran

hehehe really very phunny reading ur mixed french english comments minibot!! u really motivate me to explane u some basic gramatic stuff here...

xitrum
xitrum
Electrobel Veteran

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theMinibot
theMinibot
Electrobel Veteran

sorry...translation version--->hehe yes ero,jme am released but it once, I etais to laugh know it xitrum, but I was a little too extremely:s know there what I think in vrai(j' etais dimensioned when it A realize this piece ^^)

ZARk
ZARk
Electrobel Veteran

don't know why this hasn't got more thumbs up. it's not bad. the rythm kinda gets annoying after a while. but cool melodies and and cool sounds. Structure is a bit strange though.

theMinibot
theMinibot
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theMinibot
theMinibot
Electrobel Veteran

et donc voila comme je disais tu sais ce que j'en pense de ton tout 1er morceau et la je le dirai pour que les gens sache... franchement,comparé a mon tout 1er morceau c'est vraiment génial(tu peux allé ecouter ce que ca donnait mon 1er son dans le shitcontest,lol)et tu verra que tu es deja bien plus loin qque moi a mes debut ;) alors sur le morceau en lui meme,c'est vrai que certaine note me derange comme je te l'ai deja dis,mais il y a vraiment de tout bon passage qui font bien jeux video (comme notre petite compil commodore ;) ,en moin evoluer certe,mais l'idée est vraiment la et on sent ou tu veux en vnir ^^) les passage ou la melodie dérange un peu on s'en fout,c'est ton 1er et jme repete ca tue 10000000000 x plus que moi au debut(meme rach l'as dit ;) ) et j'espere que tu nva pas t'arreté la et que tu vas devnir le nouveau robhubbard version belgium,j'exagere p-t en dissant robhubbard mais toi qui t'y connais tu me comprend ;) allé,continue comme ca ma bicheuh ;) et ne m'en veutpas trop pour mes comment d'hier,jvoulais juste rigolé et te faire chier mes pas mechamment,tu sais cke j'en pense reellement ;) ET QUE LA SIDFORCE SOIT AVEC TOI ^^ translation--->and thus veiled as I said you know what I think of tone all 1st piece and I will say it so that people knows... frankly, compared my whole 1st piece it has is really génial(tu can gone ecouter what Ca gave my 1st sound in the shitcontest, lol)et you will see that you are already much further qque me has my beginning;) then on the piece in him same, it is true that certain note me derange as I have say it already to you, but there is really very good passage which makes video plays well (like our small compil commodore;) ,en moin evoluer certe, but the idea is really it and one feels or you want to vnir ^^) of it the passage or the melody disturbs a little one of fout, it is your 1st and jme repete Ca kills 10000000000 X more than me with the debut(meme rach the ace known as;) ) and I espere that you nva you arreté it and that you will devnir new the robhubbard version belgium, I exagere Pt by dissant robhubbard but you who know you you there includes/understands me;) gone, continuous like Ca my bicheuh;) and me in veutpas too for my how of yesterday, jvoulais just laughed and to make you shit my steps mechamment, you know cke I think about it reellement;) AND MAY THE SIDFORCE BE WITH YOU ^^

gozno
gozno
Electrobel Veteran

yeah the rhythm is very anoying you should do something about that :) if you want me to put it in the shit contest pm me ps welcome to electrobel ;)

xitrum
xitrum
Electrobel Veteran

merci m ais j'avoue que ce morceau m'enerve ...c pas pour rien que c mon premier :d

theMinibot
theMinibot
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