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cestqui

did a lot of work,but needs some more just need to filter that arpegio elektro sound(requist from aphone),but will do that when ading the vocal,cause i wanna have mylo feel into it(vocoder); i changed the piano sound into more 80's synth(requist from carbura) all and all i,think i managed to get the melo's wright(...from kiande)...i think; if anyone has an idea,for a text,or phraze,for the vocal..you r welcome i could always change the title,but ;;does not nesecary have to have the title in the text anyway,hope ya dig the many changes,and it does not sound that easy anymore,but i tried not to be chaotic let me know,thx

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

kiande
kiande
Electrobel Veteran

don't use your listeners as beta-testers! :p

vanpet
vanpet
Electrobel Veteran

i don't like it. obviously you didn't use a midimap.

KidWhisky
KidWhisky
Electrobel Veteran

sympatic but melody very messy !!!

cestqui
cestqui
Electrobel Veteran

well thx everybody,thats why i posted it(kiande),that litlle part dident fit my harmony,but i asume to mutch,when doing technical cuts & rapid them(pc does not think human) thats where it often goes wrong i already did lot of changes,fils,breaks,and..wel ya will hear...soon thx,greetz

kiande
kiande
Electrobel Veteran

ok, this could be the start of something.. bassline is ok, rhythm is basic but ok as well. BUT (there is always a but) in the part somewhere around 6m17s the melody is COMPLETELY wrong (the synth chords i mean). i mean.. come on, you surely must notice this. this is basic musical hearing. the song being under construction is no excuse for musical errors, buddy ;)

heatfuse
heatfuse
Electrobel Veteran

listened to it from the 1st til last sec...sorry to tell you this amigo, but it bored me already after 2.30...the whole things feels so uninspired! you have great technique and skills, but you need more than that to pull this one off. the melo's need more harmony.

Carbura
Carbura
Electrobel Veteran

Aren't we all?

Carbura
Carbura
Electrobel Veteran

Oh and make it a bit shorter and after 3min you can start building to a nice climax to end up in full glory around 5min30. PS: I can explain this better than doin' it myself. ;-) no vote 4 the moment

Carbura
Carbura
Electrobel Veteran

It has a good vibe (bassline). All the rest can do much better. For the strings in the back I would use longer and better notes. This one sounds like do re mi fa sol la si do si la sol fa..... If ya know what I mean. The piano part is very bad and not even on the rythem. Near the end It sounds like a bad jam session. My suggestion is to keep the main ID drum (with more work), bass( like it). All the rest needs to be more accurate IMHO. You've shown us better than this cq. I've learned that songs made in a rush can hardly be good. You can figure out a main Id (wich there is here) in that time. But I guess you knew all this. Greetz and respect.

cestqui
cestqui
Electrobel Veteran

np my friend,i'm on my way to take nr1 's place in,i 'm very happy with my do re mi fa sucka its does not always have to be complicated,you shall see and hear my friend oew jai,i forgot,i can do a lot in 2 hours,without loosing my focus on my goal,when i want to make electro pop,its right on from the start keep your enthousiastic remarks, for shakin it,when it gets finished greetz