viggen
hmmm, just an idea (don't know too much): but when this song stopped, i had the feeling it should continue with a growing bass line (kinda sort of bass line you're having now more in the background). so stop the drums, make a bass line that begins softly and grows much stronger (kinda threathening atmosphere as it's the prelude to the apocalypse lol) and then let hell break loose with a harder bass and very strong, constant drums (more dnb style instead of jungle). this is just what i felt and it's rather hard to explain (could be a bit of a cliché, too). liked what you got till now although. greetz