Nice idea/chords & drums! Still a bit to 'conventional' (not in a bad way), it's a bit to ''rechtlijnig'' for now...( Don't know te exact word & to lazy to look it up :) )... Good base for some more jamming! :) That bass eg, i'd make that a more vivit bass(line) that is complementary to your beat... And ofcourse some extra jazzy notes on top wouldn't do harm neither ;) Good luck with future edits! Grtz