hi, when i listen to your track, i hear u have the capacity to create a good sphere. the samples are matching with eachother, but i think your melody is to simple, also all 4/4 notes, try to break that. To bad u didn't take the uplifting trance way, but more hard trance / jump but that's a style u choose hehe. nice start, but still needs lots of work. thumbs up :)