i now something that will stop you,your speakers will blow up; i think it clips big time,at low volumes ,it sounds really wicked,the kinda mood i like;not so sure about that braaf stemmeke,the flute like element dont suit the picture too,too braaf,to kind for the assbitchin bazepad; work with clean revebs on the vocal,to make the voice angrier,and some chorus; i like to comment sometimes 1/2 finished songs,when i hear the bigger picture in it; ya made a hell of a job so far,just aint convincing,greetz