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Untill darkness comes
reaman
First ever live recording I made!!! Finally bought myself some decent recording equipment. This song is an acoustic song with guitar and vocals and hardly any editing. Just a little reverb on the guitar and vocal. It's about a(n imaginary) girl I got out of a sect that was brainwashing her. It's full of inaccuracies (I'm not guitarplayer nor a singer) and sometimes seriously out of sync - I know. For those who wondered...folk is one of the genres I didn't have songs in... For those interested... (capodaster on 1)) chords: first part:F5 - F7sus4 - C#maj7 - Fsus4 - Em chorus: A#m - D - A#m - D - D#maj9 - A#m edit: rather important edit, tried to sync the vocals more the way I had the song in mind. Added minor changes to effects and a very silent cello in the "solo" of the guitar (5 jan.08) Lyrics: (as if you wouldn't understand them...) Step outside into the light they claim It's not your heart but for your life they came You and I godless in their eyes In hell you lived but I 'll give you paradise They say I'll leave you with the morningdew Look into my eyes do you believe that is true They say that I fear the light cast a spell on you Run back into their arms they will surely sacrifice you untill darkness comes I know it – you just want to be saved don't hide it – you just want to be saved believe me – I can save you tonight
I made an important new edit of this song so please give it a re-listen. Although you liked the first version very much, I believe this one is better. It's more the ay I had it in my head.
this is great stuff... gave me courage to post sth alike here, I wasn't sure if it was the right place
This got some real potential:p echt vree goed erik! petje af! instrumentaal klinkt het zeer mooi, en kverschiet van uw stem in d epositieve manier!:d very good job!
H2 recorder from ZOOM - thx for the comment. 198euro (try to buy in US - about same price but in dollars - but you risk getting caught.)
Thanks for all the very positive comments... it's a real support in my search for more genuine and acoustic tracks. and to be honest... the timing of the vocals can be much better - as is the picking of the guitar. A newer and more accurate version will follow next week. Thanks for checking out my music.
totally agree with Rabauw Full of emotion and chicken chair :) Love it too, fav :)
I say yes. I try to compare both versions. First of all i like the dubbel voice at the beginning, maybe add it a bit more effect. During all your track I've imagine a cello response to your voice and what a surprise to hear it at the end. well done. ( I've also imagined a flute touch to give more drama to the song ). At 2:08 your voice have more brightness, the change is too audible. It should be probably good to keep this tone all along. There are some unwanted tempo variations that makes me difficult to remix it :) but in a live without gard I guess it's impossible . One last thing for post treatment, eliminate the noise, it's quite easy I did it with no special software and it sounds better again. I hope that my comment do not afraid you, I really really love this song.
*blushes* *reads the comment again* *blushes even more - feels very happy* *says thank you very much*
ah, dus bij deze vervalt mijne PM met de vraag of ge al ne micro gekocht had :-) This is EXCELLENT! Damn, December seems to be such a great month for Ebel's musical quality. A lot of splendid songs that I've discovered over the past couple of days. I love it Reaman, one of your best songs ever! It's filled with sincerity, emotion, and sadness. The fact that you recorded it live and not programmed it also gives extra genuine credit to the song. I like the lyrics a lot too, interesting topic that you're dealing with. Your voice suits this kind of music too. Excellent job, yepyep, a marvellous song to end 2007 with. Some discovery this is! Ni twijfelen, straight into my favs.
Now I can go sleeping. Peaceful, your song is simply amazing and the quality of the recording makes me voiceless. Congratulations for the performance, keep going (also) in this way !